Modifications??

Plot- a story revolved around friends with multiple point of views? or a single walkthrough from a protagonist's point of view?

Well, personally I have been writting POV stories for a very long time, always splitting up different segments of the story with the familar three symbols

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while i think they can still be utilised for this project, but if we were to have like 4-5 characters, it will be kinda hard to juggle between the characters and yet mantain a stong plotline.

I'm suggesting perhaps we choose 2 more major characters out of the lot? we make the 2 of them progress towards each other, while the other characters seek to supplement the main characters tgt and stuff.

Jake can be kept, i'll see if the other character can be tweaked.... i am thinking of a girl now, relly opp of jake, but as in a very good girl kinda of persona different. I would like to bring much of society today through her eyes- the good, the ideal and the real; her parents teachings of being clean and obedient, with the real world of dirt and grittiness (of jake, and Dejengski)

I think i would keep Dejengski, but i'll put him in a slightly minor character- i'll not give any 3rd person perspective on him, but narrate his warped thoughts 1st person in italics.

Do comment on this post your thoughts, if there is any slight disagreement, just shoot. It beats putting up a smiling front and losing interest along the way, yeah?